Page 47 of the first half rewrite

Bottom of the page, so almost three pages.

Not sure if the sequence I've just written is going to stay in there - but gotta try it out to see. It's all going okay. Every so often I think about how much more I'm going to have to do - not just in this draft, but in subsequent drafts...

That way madness lies.

It's the tightrope artist not looking down, the journey of a thousand miles beginning with the first step (and continuing with the other steps)...

Yes, I have been using metaphor in my script. Not terribly subtly (at least not in this draft), as you can see...